tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1248193231958936629.post594497586034536771..comments2024-03-09T15:57:58.218+11:00Comments on Justified Lunacy: Tales from the Sideline BlogfestAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01677563505368503476noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1248193231958936629.post-85622534728683160042010-07-10T07:53:00.765+10:002010-07-10T07:53:00.765+10:00Love the way it ended, with him joining the party....Love the way it ended, with him joining the party. Kind of like he's coming off the bench. lol. <br /><br />Sorry I'm late to this, but I did post one. I'll be checking on some more entries later tonight. I have a hot date with the hubby in just a few. ;-PAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13267066733031149882noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1248193231958936629.post-53133883512857274662010-07-10T04:13:45.002+10:002010-07-10T04:13:45.002+10:00Nice entry. Thanks again for hosting this blogfest...Nice entry. Thanks again for hosting this blogfest!Stephanie Loréehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03512485557711771802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1248193231958936629.post-29878628571680946062010-07-09T13:38:15.419+10:002010-07-09T13:38:15.419+10:00Don't worry Kerri, your excerpt was interestin...Don't worry Kerri, your excerpt was interesting. This is definitely from Haven.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01677563505368503476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1248193231958936629.post-41559062923571584572010-07-09T11:20:09.697+10:002010-07-09T11:20:09.697+10:00Oh my goodness I think I was suppose to put my sce...Oh my goodness I think I was suppose to put my scene on my own blog ha ha. Talk about the sun frying my brain. Sheesh I better stay out of the sun!! Okay well I better get on that.<br /><br />I couldn't help reading your excerpt again Cheree! Is that from Haven? I want to read it all LOL!!<br /><br />Hope everyone had a great day!<br />ps now I know how to do a blogfest lol!Kerri Cuevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13305892536084882077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1248193231958936629.post-32108043970350997152010-07-09T09:18:56.459+10:002010-07-09T09:18:56.459+10:00Nice work. I'm not big on vampires but I love ...Nice work. I'm not big on vampires but I love witches. This scene was interesting, had a good level of setting without taking it to far and characters that are intriguing. Liked it and have enjoyed this blogfest. Great idea and great post!Dawn Embershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00214560861614476799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1248193231958936629.post-49703761071949136112010-07-09T09:07:40.824+10:002010-07-09T09:07:40.824+10:00I'm intrigued by the world(s) and the tension ...I'm intrigued by the world(s) and the tension between two characters. Wondering about their past and future and would love to read more.Laura Canonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16574566234310522696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1248193231958936629.post-46002834589873928482010-07-09T06:14:36.530+10:002010-07-09T06:14:36.530+10:00The world you are creating is really clear through...The world you are creating is really clear through just this snippet. There's a sense of resignation about their friendship. There's not the excitement of the forbidden, just sadness. Very real.Erin Kane Spockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05376851676240606472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1248193231958936629.post-58834455931199530122010-07-09T05:21:38.259+10:002010-07-09T05:21:38.259+10:00Very nice visuals, great interaction between the t...Very nice visuals, great interaction between the two. Your MC seems to have a knack for understatement--"I may still be a tiny bit bitter."--which I absolutely love even more in-your-face sarcasm.<br /><br />Thanks for hosting!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1248193231958936629.post-7691014193457554872010-07-09T02:04:13.317+10:002010-07-09T02:04:13.317+10:00I love the character voice here. It strikes me as ...I love the character voice here. It strikes me as vaguely reminiscant of the sort of thing Kim Harrison does.stuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16388674850920848503noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1248193231958936629.post-53973662904514454182010-07-08T23:56:40.072+10:002010-07-08T23:56:40.072+10:00Hi Cheree. Interesting world you've created, a...Hi Cheree. Interesting world you've created, and I like the idea that these two may form a connection even though it's dangerous. Love the line about the PDA!<br />Thanks so much for hosting this blogfest. I found that I thought a lot more about the role of secondary characters in the process. Can't wait to read everyone's entries!Tricia J. O'Brienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05993110400088806252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1248193231958936629.post-39132987230246891362010-07-08T23:37:02.080+10:002010-07-08T23:37:02.080+10:00When you posted this I knew exactly what scene to ...When you posted this I knew exactly what scene to showcase. I had SO much FUN writing it. Enjoy!<br /><br />Sidekicks:Jared and Scott (werewolf's)<br />MC: Jana(vamp/wolf) and Elliot(wolf)<br />Scene setup: They just duked it out and are now all crammed in a Mustang going home.<br /><br />Elliot carried her bags and put them in the trunk while still watching Jana get into the car. When the trunk closed he saw her turn and smile at him.<br /><br /> Elliot threw the keys of his prized possession to Jared through the open window of the car.<br /> <br /> A grin spread across his face. “Seriously man?”<br /><br /> “Dude today is your lucky day.” <br /><br /> Scott looked at him. “What you don’t trust me to drive?”<br /><br /> “Not after you wanted to run over pedestrians last week to give as a gift to your vampire girlfriend.”<br /><br /> “But she likes organic blood. I would have definitely gotten my way with that kind of gift.”<br /><br /> Jana cleared her throat. “Why don’t you just bring her a live victim,” She was part of the gang when they stopped minding their manners around her. Burping and farting became part of the normal conversation.<br /><br /> “Don’t encourage him would you.” Elliot rolled his eyes. “Man how did you stand sitting back here. My legs are going to be numb crammed back here for so long.”<br /><br /> “Don’t worry maybe Jana can rub them better for you,” Scott joked. He was going to rag on Elliot the whole trip since he wasn’t driving.<br /><br /> “Is that like legal because she is your sister by law or something?” Jared asked.<br /><br /> Scott chimed in poking fun of them until Jana couldn’t take it anymore. She leaned over and planted her lips firmly on Elliot’s with a quick release. <br /> <br /> “Does that answer your question? We’re not related.”<br /><br /> “You better watch out for her. She is a little she-wolf!”<br /><br /> “Grrrr!” <br /><br /> Now not cursed Elliot allowed his heart to race at the feel of her lips. Maybe there was hope for them yet. That kiss would surly keep him up all night.<br /><br /> “Your boyfriend doesn’t mind you kissing werewolves?” Jared asked.<br /><br /> He just had to ask. “He never was my boyfriend. I mean we acted like it but it was never spoken or official or anything like that.”<br /><br /> “What a stupid vamp! Heck if you're not taken I’ll ask you out.”<br /><br /> Elliot gave a low growl and smacked him in the back of his head. There were minions in the parking lot who were looking over with curiosity. “Drive before the humans call animal control on us.”Kerri Cuevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13305892536084882077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1248193231958936629.post-32559128145813569562010-07-08T23:16:57.467+10:002010-07-08T23:16:57.467+10:00Great scene Cheree!
Glad you posted early because ...Great scene Cheree!<br />Glad you posted early because I 'm off to the beach. Can't wait to come home and read everyone's scene!!Kerri Cuevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13305892536084882077noreply@blogger.com