So, what needs to happen? Here I will post my first line and I'm asking for any and all suggestions (be honest, I'm a big girl, if necessary) so I can post it to Brenda's blog at the end of the blogfest.
What’s up for grabs? A query critique, a 25 pages + query critique, and a 50 pages + query critique by none other than Weronika Janczuk, writer and agent with D4EO Lit Agency!
Now, for my entry:
- Working Title: SHADOW EMBRACED
- Genre: Young Adult Urban Fantasy
- First line: Her blows come quick and hard, knocking me back into the fleshy wall of the crowd.